geir-f@hsr.no (Geir Friestad) Aa! Megami-sama: Koi no Tane A Lemon Fanfiction Version 1.3, 21st January 94 Character copyright, Fujishima Kosuke Story copyright, Geir Friestad Proofreading, Chadwick Ngan * * * * * *POOF!* Without warning the brew exploded, erupting a thick cloud of smoke and steam in Urd's face. Coughing a bit, eyes stinging, she waved the unpleasant smoke away, peering enthusiastically into the container. Had it been a successful experiment? Had her careful selection and mixing of ingredients turned out to be right? Yes! Or at least, that's how it appeared to be. The love seeds that she now held in her left hand had the right color, look and smell - but would they have the desired effect? Would they really greatly enhance the passionate feelings of whoever ate them? She thought they would. Her preparations had been careful and there was no reason why they shouldn't work. If they turned out to be faulty after all... well, the effect probably wouldn't last forever. Urd closed her eyes and clutched the love seeds in her hand. "This will be an experience neither of them will forget!" she thought and grinned. "Belldandy!" "Yes?" Belldandy put down her knitwear and looked up at Urd. "Sister, I've made something, a new kind of snack. I think I'll call it passion popcorn! Anyway, would you like to taste one? Please?" "Waaah! So cute!" Belldandy exclaimed and put her hands together, smiling sweetly. She popped one of Urd's love seeds into her mouth. Urd's pulse quickened while she waited for the love seed to take effect. It would work! Yes, she was sure of it! She had been so careful, and-- "Oishii!" Belldandy beamed sweetly. "Aa--" Urd exclaimed. This was not how she was supposed to react! "Nee-san! Are you not feeling well?" Belldandy's voice was full of concern for her older sister. "I'm okay, I'm okay..." she mumbled and headed back to her room, wondering what could have gone wrong. *DOKI!* "Aa--" *DOKI!* *DOKI!* "Aa-- wha... what is happening to me?" Belldandy tried to think, to understand what was happening to her, but it was futile. Her heartbeats grew louder still, making it harder and harder for her to suppress the effect of Urd's love seed. At last she gave in, and a thought, a name, began to take form in her mind. "Keiichi-san..." Her cheeks started to glow with a rosy red color. She smiled... "Ah, it's just as I thought. The sparkplug merely needs to be replaced. Now where did I put those spare plugs? Hmm..." Keiichi bent over on the box he was sitting on and started searching through his toolbox, not noticing his sweet- heart Belldandy sneaking up on him from behind. "Ke-i-i-chi-san!" Belldandy put her arms around him, embracing him tightly, her breasts pressing against his back. "Waaaaah! Wha... wha... what are you doing?!" Keiichi leapt to his feet, cheeks glowing bright red. Belldandy's embrace and the sensation of her breasts pressing against him had no doubt been a pleasant, although unexpected, surprise. "Keiichi-san..." Belldandy smiled, blushing a bit, "would you go shopping with me? Please?" "Well, uh, I promised Tamiya-sempai I would have this motorcycle fixed by tomorrow, but... I guess... If it really is that important to you I'll go, of course." "Waah! Thank you, Keiichi-san! I'm so happy! Please wait here while I fetch my umbrella." "I wonder what has happened to Belldandy? She doesn't normally act like this... Still, it'll be nice to be alone with her..." he thought while scratching the back of his head. "Ohohohohoho! My love seeds work after all! I knew I couldn't be wrong!" From her observation spot up on the temple-roof Urd had witnessed the whole incident, and now she smiled to herself. Her love seeds worked! Her younger sister was literally overflowing with passion, and no-one -- not even God-sama -- could possible predict what would happen between her sister and Keiichi now. They would both like it, though, that much she knew. You didn't have to be a love goddess to realize that. She smiled again. "Maybe we'll finally get to see some real action from those two... That would be a nice victory for me!" She laughed and leaned back to enjoy the mild autumn breeze. It would be a fine day. --- "Belldandy..." "Mmmm? What is it, Keiichi-san?" Belldandy lifted her head from Keiichi's right shoulder and turned her head to face him. "I don't want to ruin the shopping-trip for you, but... well... I'm starved and my feet could use some rest." "Aah! Keiichi-san! I'm so sorry! It's my fault... I..." "Aah! Oh no! Please don't take it like that, Belldandy! I merely wanted to suggest that we find a nice restaurant, and..." "Keiichi-san, I've got a better idea! Let's buy some food and go on a picnic in the park!" "Mmm!" Keiichi nodded in approval. It really was a good idea! Not only would the nature's own scenery (or at least something close) be a lot more appealing than the inside of a restaurant, it would also give him a chance at being alone with Belldandy. He blushed, and she smiled at him, almost as if she knew what he was thinking of... --- Later that day, Keiichi lay on his bed thinking about what had happened in the park. Belldandy had been unusually romantic all day, and it had culminated with her beginning to strip, wanting him to make love to her right there in the park. And what had he done? Not really wanting to, but unable not to, he replayed the scene again and again in his head, noticing every painful detail. How she had offered him her body while half laying on top of him, half clinging to him. How she had touched him through the material of the pants, and how he had panicked. He had pushed her off him, babbling all sorts of excuses and reasons why they couldn't do such a thing. And certainly not there in the park! Belldandy had cried, and between her sobs she had asked if he didn't want her anymore, if she should go back to Heaven. Unable to answer he had just sat there, looking at her sadly. She had run off with tears streaming down her cheeks. He had run after her, but when he finally caught up with her she had refused to look up at him or say anything. All the way home she had been silent too, never looking up. "Aaargh! Why must I be so stupid? Because I'm such a wimp, not only have I missed my chance at making love to the girl I love, I've also hurt her feelings and may now lose her forever! Why is God so unfair? I... I... Aaa--" The door to Keiichi's room slid open and Belldandy came in with a concerned look on her face and sat down next to him. "Keiichi-san... Please forgive me, I came to apologize and I... I couldn't help but hearing you talking, and... It's not true what you are saying. God-sama is not unfair, he merely gives everyone a chance to shine in their own special way... I love you Keiichi-san. You shine like no-one else, and I don't want to lose you, but in the park today... when you rejected me... I thought I had lost you, and... and... I..." "Belldandy..." He moved in close to her and hugged her tightly. "I don't want to lose you, Belldandy. I... I... love you, I hope you know that... What happened in the park today... I... wasn't ready for it, but... Belldandy?" "Yes?" "If you still would like to..." A hopeful look crossed his face. "Keiichi-san..." She smiled with relief and wrapped her arms around him, hugging him tightly... --- Keiichi swallowed and gently removed the final piece of cloth covering Belldandy's naked body. "Y-you're beautiful!" he exclaimed, blushing violently. "Thank you, Keiichi-san. You're so sweet!" She smiled and moaned slightly as Keiichi carefully ran his fingers across her breasts. He bent down and kissed each nipple, feeling them harden under his tongue. Belldandy moaned again. "Aah... wait... we have to... ah.. get you naked too..." she whispered, and reached down to unbuckle his belt. Keiichi removed his sweatshirt and was about to put it down on the floor when he suddenly froze. A wonderful sensation he had never felt before... It was coming from... where? He looked down and was greeted by the sight of Belldandy swallowing him with great enthusiasm. He groaned with lust and felt a touch of shame. Was this right? "Belldaaaah.... aahh... Belldandy..." "Shhh! It's alright, please just lie down and enjoy this." He did, and when he came moments later, Belldandy swallowed everything, loving the taste of her Keiichi's own love seed. "Oishii!" she beamed, licking her lips seductively. "Just wait, Bell-chan. Now it's your turn," Keiichi panted. Stimulating her breasts and the insides of her thighs with his tongue, he worked her up quite a bit before slowly inserting his index finger into her. Then added on to the effect by stimulating her clitoris with his tongue. She came moments later, and not quietly. He hoped Skuld wasn't around; she would certainly not take an incident like this well, should she happen to walk in on them. Urd would probably not bother them, though... Dismissing those thoughts, he smiled and looked up at Belldandy. "Now?" "Mmmm... Yes! Yes, please!" Belldandy moaned and nodded in reply, obviously aching to feel Keiichi pushing inside her. He moved on top of her and slowly, slowly, slid into her, feeling the warmth, the sensation of her tight vagina pressing against him. Slowly building up rhythm, they started moving together at first in slow, lingering moves, but soon speeding up, moving faster and faster. At last they came, Keiichi first and Belldandy moments later. Exhausted they fell asleep in each other's arms... "Hahaha! I win! My love seeds worked, and you owe me a bag of peanuts!" Urd exclaimed triumphantly from underneath the plant in the corner of Keiichi's room. "Aww, shucks! Oh well, I suppose getting those two together is worth a bag or two," the rat sighed and handed her the prize. Epilogue: The next day, Belldandy confronted her older sister Urd. "Nee-san, those popcorn you made yesterday..." "Eeehhh... heheheh... eh... yes?" "Keiichi-san and me are having a picnic on our own this weekend... the popcorn were really good, so... would you make us some popcorn for the picnic, nee-san? Please?" Belldandy asked and smiled. "Aa--" *THUD!* "Nee-san! Please don't faint now! Aa--" - Owari - A couple of notes about my fanfict - "Koi no Tane" First of all, "Koi no Tane" was to a certain extent inspired by chapter 43 of Fujishima Kosuke's original manga. The similarities between the original story -- "Belldandy On-ranshin" -- and the first half of my own "Koi no Tane" are intentional. Those familiar with both the manga and anime of "Aa! Megami-sama" will know that there is a noticeable difference between manga Belldandy and anime Belldandy. I chose to base Belldandy's personality in my story on her anime personality, simply because I personally prefer it to the manga. To those of you in the audience who think "Aa! Megami- sama" is too sweet to base a lemon story on, I apologize. Personally I don't feel a lemon fanfiction necessarily have to degrade the original characters. I love "Aa! Megami-sama" like few others do, and I did my best to keep the spirit of the original stories, while still going one step further. Whether I succeeded or not is not up to me to decide, I guess. Please send in those comments, folks, but please don't be *too* hard on me - this is my first shot ever at writing a fanfiction (lemon or otherwise). ^_^;; Background music... The cd "Kamisama no Okurimono" by the Goddess Family Club was played pretty extensively while I was working on this story, and it probably had some influence on my writing, at least that's what I feel. Anyway, this cd is perfect bgm to put on your stereo while reading, particularly track 4. Track 5 is also excellent (my fave track, if you must know ^_-)... Language... English is not my first language, and there are probably a bunch of errors in the text that I never spotted. So... comments and corrections are appreciated! I'll stop writing this drivel pretty soon now; I need to finish this before "Picket Fences" start on Channel 2 in a couple of minutes, and I really don't have a lot more to say. I would like to note that I *might* turn this story into a doujinshi sometime in the future, though. I really feel a lot more comfortable using my pens to draw those curves rather than scribble down some story, you know... ^_- Anyway, whether this story gets drawn or not will depend entirely on how much free time I have (not very much at the moment) and whether or not I feel the quality of my art is good enough. Let's just say, don't hold your breath, okay? ^_- -- Geir "Morisato Keiichi" Friestad ... Admirer of Belldandy and Laura Dern Hobby manga artist - anime/manga otaku - AMG otaku - movie nut - vfx otaku E-mail: emotion@gribb.hsr.no or geir-f@hsr.no ... IRC: Keiichi Maintainer of the "Ah! My Goddess" FAQ "___/^_^\___ Ninjin ga suki da! *miya* ___/^_^\___"