mcreque@vt.edu (Mike Creque) This is my first attempt at fanfiction so any kind of feedback is appreciated. I hope you all like it. Flames will be cheerfully delteted. Note: This is a LEMON fanfic, so if that isn't you're kinda thing, don't get this! [ Note: All characters portrayed here are copyright material of Rumiko Takahashi and are used without permission. This story is intended solely for the entertainment of anyone who wants to read it and doesn't mind LEMON fanfic. If this kind of thing bothers you, stop here! ] Love in My Dream ---------------- [ Shot of Lum laying on her stomach on her bed. She is dressed in her customary tiger-striped bikini and is busiliy writing in her diary about the latest day of her life on Earth. ] Lum[ voice-over as she writes]: Nothing unusual happened today. Darling was chasing after Shinobu and half a dozen other girls again, but I put a stop to that. [ Flashback to a shot of an angry Lum berating a blackened, smoking Ataru ] Lum: I don't understand Darling sometimes. I love him more than anything, but there are times that I wonder if he feels the same way. I do all I can to keep him faithful to me, but he keeps on running away from me. Maybe he is just teasing me, but I wonder if he really doesn't love me. [ Lum sighs and rests her head on her hands. As she thinks about what she had just written, tears form in her eyes and soon begin streaming down her cheeks. She closes her eyes to try an stop the flow, but it doesn't help. Eventually her eyes do dry, and she falls asleep. ] [ Lum feels a hand gently shaking her awake. She opens her eyes and looks up to see Ataru looking down at her ] Lum[ sitting up ]: Darling? Wh-what are you doing in here? Ataru: I heard you crying from outside, so I came to see what was wrong. Are you alright? Lum[ surprised at the Ataru she's seeing ]: Un. I-I'm fine. [ She quickly turns away from Ataru, who moves around to sit next to her ] Ataru: I don't believe that. Try again. [ takes her hand ] Lum[ Swallowing hard ]: I...I was writing in my diary about...us and how I didn't think you...[ trails off ] [ she looks away. When she turns back, tears have formed again ] Lum: Darling, I love you more than anything and I do all I can to make you love me, but you still run. What can I do? No matter whay I try, you just don't seem to love me. [ Lum loses herself and starts to sob. She buries her head in Ataru's chest, expecting him to push her away. To her surprise, he wraps his arms around her. She feels comforted and soon stops crying. ] Lum[ pulling away slightly ]: I-I'm sorry Darling. I lost control of myself. Ataru[ brushes away remaining tears ] Forget it, Lum. [ Lum looks at him. After a moment he leans forward and presses his lips to hers. She hadn't expected this. But the feeling of his warm lips on hers soon washed away any surprise and she surrendered to his kiss. When they finally seperated, Lum looks questioningly at him. ] Lum: Darling? Why? Why now? I mean, I waited and waited forever for this, but I didn't expect it now. Why now, after so long? Ataru: I-I can't explain it Lum. But I do love you, I always have. I don't know why I never told you. I guess I didn't know myself. I know you love me and I want you to know that I love you too. [ Lum is overjoyed at this change in Ataru, and moves forward to kiss him. She kisses him with emphasis; their tougues dueling in their mouths. The are like that for quite a while. While they are kissing, Ataru reaches up and begins to fondle Lum's breasts through her bikini top. ] Lum: Ummm.... [ She could feel her body beginnnig to respond to Ataru's exploration, but she wanted more. She reached her hand over and began to rub his crotch. Lum could fell him responding to her added stimulation, his cock growing in but her hand, but his hands on her breasts were really starting to have an effect on her. She reached back and undid her top and it fell off of her, allowing him full access to her breasts. He began to rub each nipple with his palms until Lum thought they would explode, they were so rigid. He finally breaks their kiss and takes one of her nipples into his mouth. Lum gasps at the feeling of her nipple in his warm mouth. ] Lum[ eyes closed ]: Darling...please keep going. It feels wonderful. [ He stops to smile at her then moves to her other nipple. As he nurses on it, he reaches his hand down to the V of her legs. He gently rubs her through the thin material of her bikini bottom. Lum felt the new stimulation and let out a soft moan. She had masturbated before, but just the feeling of his hand on her crotch was almost too much. She opens her eyes to focus on Ataru. His one hand is gently stroking her crotch, the other is beginning to pull on the waistband of her bottom. ] Ataru: Lum...do you mind? Lum[ smiling ]: Please, go ahead. [ He pulls off her bottom leaving her totally naked. Lum feels the cold air against her bare bottom and shivers a little. The shivers are of another kind a moment later when he moves his hand to her clit and begins to stroke it gently. Nothing she had ever done alone could ever match this. She could feel her sex juice flowing freely and couldn't ever remember being this aroused before. Ataru merely stimulates her clit for a moment more, then lowers his mouth to her. ] Lum: Oooh..... [ He gently strokes her clit as he uses his tougue to explore her womanhood. She is in ecstacy and is concentrating only on the area between her thighs. Ataru inserted his tougue into her and gently moves it in and out, all the while stroking her clit. The combined stimulation is too much for her. She felt fireworks going off in her head and bright lights flashing before her eyes. With a soft sigh, she grinds her crotch into his face and coates it with her sex juices. In all of her years she had never had an orgasm so hard. But it wasn't enough for her...] Lum[ after recovering ]: Darling, would you...would you make love to me? I want you...[ blushing at this last admission] Ataru[ smiling ]: Hai...Lum-chan. [ He moves slowly, as he removes his clothes. Lum sits watching, gently stroking her clit. He gets down to his underwear and slowly begins to remove them. She is very aroused and his teasing her is too much. She reaches out and rips them off of him, exposing him to her ] Ataru[ smiling ]: What's wrong Lum? Lum[ taking hold of his cock ]: Darling no baka... [ She guides him to her hole, which is already glisening with anticipation of pleasures to come. He gently pushes her down flat on the bed and then moves into postition over her. She leans her head back and sighs deeply as she feels him slowly sliding into her. She can feel her vagaina walls streaching to accomadate the large intruder moving into her. He begins to push forward, but stops suddenly, as he has met her hymen.] Lum[ noting his hesitation ]: Don't worry, I'll be fine. [ Ataru kisses her and she shuts her eyes. He pushes forward, a bit more forcefully. She winces and then lets out a sudden cry of pain as her hymen gives way to the intruder. The pain doesn't last long, and her cry of pain is soon replaced by moans of pleasure. ] Lum[ wrapping her legs around him ]: Darling you feel so good.... [ He smiles at her and begins to thrust. She shuts her eyes and is oblivious to anything but herself, her Darling laboring above her and the intense feeling of pleasure that was building in her. He filled her completely, and she was well on her way to orgasm. Her breathing is reduced to short gasps as her orgasm rapidly approaches. She notes that Ataru's breathing has also increased and she assumes that his is approaching as well. She gently squeezes her vagaina muscles to give his erection a little incentive to empty it's load. The squeeze is enough to cause him to groan and start to spurt his seed into her. She could feel his cock jump inside her and the feeling of his come shooting in her sent her over the edge. She dug her fingers into his back and she heard a soft, high-pitched moan come from her. She could feel her sex cream rush down her tunnel, coating his cock and dribble down onto the bed. She felt like she never wanted to come down from the high of her orgasm, but Ataru collapsing onto her was enough. In all her life, she had never felt so happy, so satisfied...] [ Lum awakes with a start. She immediately notices that her breathing rate has increased drastically and that she is sweating. ] Lum[ to herself ]: That was a dream? Goodness, it seemed so real... [ Glancing down, she notices for the first time that her hand is buried in her bikini bottom, gently working in the reccess hidden there. She also notes that her bottom is completely soaked and that a large wet spot is slowly spreading across her bedsheet.] Lum[ giggling ]: Guess that explains it. [ removes her hand and sniffs her fingers ] Still...it was a wonderful dream... [ She returns her hand to her crotch and leans against the wall, remembering her dream. She gets completely caught up in her fantasy until...] Ataru[ coming in ]: Lum! What's all of the noise in he...? Lum?! [ Lum looks up in horror and their eyes meet and lock. She feels a sudden rush of shame and guilt. She had been caught masturbating by her Darling. She began to channel her shame into another emotion. Her initial shock quickly changes to anger. ] Lum[ crackling ]: DON'T YOU EVER KNOCK?! DARLING NO BAKAAAAAAA! Ataru[ running away and sizzling ]: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! [ to be continued...hopefully ] ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well, that's it. If anyone likes I might write another one, if I have time. CS is a tough profession...:) Seriously, any feedback on this will be appreciated, so I can figure out if I should write some more or just toss away my pen and paper. Flames will be read, and quickly disposed of. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mike Creque[mcreque@vt.edu] "In a Democracy, dissent Virginia Tech Electronic Gaming Society is an act of faith" President and generally nice guy..:) -- Fulbright -------------------------------------------------------------------------